“If We Were Villains” is a murder mystery story portrayed as a Shakespearean drama. The story is constructed like a play with scenes and acts. Oliver, the narrator is in a tight friend group of acting students.

The prologue is set in the present with Oliver after his ten-year prison sentence of a murder he may or may not have committed. Then the rest of the scenes are what leads up to the murder and the present.
The first scene sets up the group’s relationships and foreshadows future conflicts. Richard later loses his temper due to the unscripted rehearsal not going the way he was hoping. He showcased his aggressive personality, as well as highlighting the tension between the group of friends. Later at a party Richard attacks James which demonstrates his aggression.
A big idea in the story was power and rivalry. Richard is perceived to have some power compared to others. At the same time, he has different rivalries among the group. With his aggressive personality, he is isolated from the group.

The story also demonstrates the high-pressure learning environments in their school. The book focuses on the competitive aspects of having to audition and compete against friends in order to get a preferred part.
Another big idea is loyalty and betrayal. In the group of friends, there is expected to be loyalty among everyone. However, at the lake party, Richard shows betrayal when he tries to drown James. This shows a break in trust and solid relationships within the group.
M.L Rio’s diction often includes poetic and dramatic phrases which align with the student’s connection to Shakespeare. This diction shows the difference between Shakespearean art and reality. I’m not a big fan of her diction and language because there are some Shakespearean references and I don’t know much about Shakespeare so it can be confusing at times.